Welcome to my blog! This is a place where I can share my learning journey. My blog is a collection of questions, ideas, learning in progress and finished work. Please make comments so I can learn more and improve my work. Thanks!
You have some great ideas here Gracie! Make sure you re-read your work out loud so you can hear if it makes sense for the reader. Remember full stops go at the end of a sentence.
Hi it's Jasmine here from Gilberthorpe school I am a year 5. I love this peace of writing because you have described it more and you have used adjectives through out your own writing. Well done and keep up the good work and I wish you lots of luck through out your learning.
Hi my name is Gracie and I'm a year 5 and thank you so much for commenting I really appreciate that and please give your address please so I can check it out and I could comment thank very much.
Kia Ora Gracie i'm Mackenzie from gilberthorpe school i'm a y6 You have added a lot of detail in this piece of writing very scary ( in a good way ) anyway I hope you have a good day until then Bye!
Tena Koe Mackenzie I'm from Owairaka district school and I'm a year 5 I am a year younger and my name is Gracie.Thank you so much I really appreciate you commenting can I get your address please so I can check your blog thank's.
You have some great ideas here Gracie! Make sure you re-read your work out loud so you can hear if it makes sense for the reader. Remember full stops go at the end of a sentence.
ReplyDeleteHi it's Jasmine here from Gilberthorpe school I am a year 5.
ReplyDeleteI love this peace of writing because you have described it more and you have used adjectives through out your own writing. Well done and keep up the good work and I wish you lots of luck through out your learning.
Hi my name is Gracie and I'm a year 5 and thank you so much for commenting I really appreciate that and please give your address please so I can check it out and I could comment thank very much.
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Kia Ora Gracie i'm Mackenzie from gilberthorpe school i'm a y6
ReplyDeleteYou have added a lot of detail in this piece of writing very scary ( in a good way ) anyway I hope you have a good day until then Bye!
Tena Koe Mackenzie I'm from Owairaka district school and I'm a year 5 I am a year younger and my name is Gracie.Thank you so much I really appreciate you commenting can I get your address please so I can check your blog thank's.
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